viernes, 13 de diciembre de 2013

the best day of my life

initial

This day begins like all, waking on a Monday, that was the worst and I hate like everyone but had to get dressed and mounted in the car but I realized after a while that we were not going to coleguio but the plya during a week that was fantastic because I was going to wake up early and have a lot less going to istituto empeco is that as a bad day ended up being a great day

correction

This day begins like any awakening on Monday, it was the worst and I do not like anyone, but I had to get dressed and get on the car, but realized after a while that we were not going to school and was a big surprise and we were going a week at the beach and this day that started as a bad day term as being one of the best

jueves, 5 de diciembre de 2013

the best day of my life

This day begins like all, waking on a Monday, that was the worst and I hate like everyone but had to get dressed and mounted in the car but I realized after a while that we were not going to coleguio but the plya during a week that was fantastic because I was going to wake up early and have a lot less going to istituto empeco is that as a bad day ended up being a great day

martes, 12 de noviembre de 2013

Correction of the writing

initial

Next week in Padre Pio we will do a week of cleaning the rubbish, in this activity participeited all the neighbour, the principal purpose is clean all the neighbourhood and the activities we will do is paint the walls and plants treesvin the park of the the neighbourhood.

correction

Next week in the neighborhood Padre Pio will make a week cleaning of garbage, in this activity involving all the neighbors, the main objective is to clean up the neighborhood and the activities they will do is remove  painted walls of houses, plant a lot of trees in the neighborhood park, make purchase specialized containers to encourage recycling and hire sweepers for cleaning mentengan always.

lunes, 11 de noviembre de 2013

clean the neighbourhood

Next week in Padre Pio we will do a week of cleaning the rubbish, in this activity participeited all the neighbour, the principal purpose is clean all the neighbourhood and the activities we will do is paint the walls and plants treesvin the park of the the neighbourhood.

jueves, 10 de octubre de 2013

My first writing 10/10/2013

Everyone go to McDonalds because is cheap, these restaurant is open 24 hour. Is fast food restaurant, all the people ask chiken bite but I ask double hamburger. The food is very very fattening.